Hi Ciaran... I'm wondering if you saw the feedback on your previous post regarding my views on your other idea... I do think the idea with the greenhouse having an actual function in the story - so the robot and the colonisation idea - plus the tone of that story - all very strong and all very filmic. This story isn't without potential, but I think your alternate plot had lots and lots of potential... also, in terms of design etc, your other idea has one character and a fixed environment, which seems more focused in terms of project management.
Hi. I went with this idea because I was stuck on how to visualize some of the ideas of the other ones, and this was what had seen the most approval at the time. I do have the 3 bits of text for the second almost done, so I can finish and upload those this afternoon.
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ReplyDeleteHi Ciaran... I'm wondering if you saw the feedback on your previous post regarding my views on your other idea... I do think the idea with the greenhouse having an actual function in the story - so the robot and the colonisation idea - plus the tone of that story - all very strong and all very filmic. This story isn't without potential, but I think your alternate plot had lots and lots of potential... also, in terms of design etc, your other idea has one character and a fixed environment, which seems more focused in terms of project management.
Hi. I went with this idea because I was stuck on how to visualize some of the ideas of the other ones, and this was what had seen the most approval at the time. I do have the 3 bits of text for the second almost done, so I can finish and upload those this afternoon.
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